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Title: Second atempt... Post by: Kingofrandom78 on June 06, 2007, 12:01:31 PM If you dont like it dont post... it wasnt ment to be a serios sig, i was just starte messin around and smd sed i shud get quailman Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Snafupossum on June 06, 2007, 05:52:12 PM if you dont want any negative feedback, how do you expect to get better?
Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Kingofrandom78 on June 06, 2007, 05:52:47 PM fine...make me cry
Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: drfweega on June 06, 2007, 07:19:13 PM Ok, now that you are accepting feedback I'll be happy to assist you.
Pros ----- 1) Font is not too shabby 2) Background is banging sweet 3) Scan lines look pretty good Cons ------ 1) Way to big width & height which makes things seem lonely 2) Render looks nothing like the background and just feels out of space 3) No border Keep up the good work, you'll get better with practice and our suggestions. Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Kingofrandom78 on June 07, 2007, 01:02:08 AM ok what size shud i use?
the render was just for a laff i can add a border and when are we gonna see vol 2 ??? ive watched vol 1 a million times EDIT: Ive redone it a bit, adding the border and 'niceing' up the font. tell me, better or worse? (http://yachi.smdepot.net/IMGS/18672.png) Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: drfweega on June 07, 2007, 05:35:19 AM Border looks good. The font glow needs to be changed to a different color to match either the render or the background itself. The aspect ratio should be the same size as mine or smaller.. I wouldn't recommend choosing anything larger than that otherwise it just looks to bulky and empty, but then again it's up to you whether you like the way it looks.
Spend a little more time with fixing those issues and then repost the new version so I can see how much farther you've come. As for Vol. 2 it won't be coming out for a while because I am building a new PC and I ran across a problem with the mobo and I am getting them to send me a brand new one. Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Snipes101 on June 07, 2007, 05:37:22 AM Lol Yachi i looks cool, but isn't that Doug or something like that from like 10-12 year ago on nick?
Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Kingofrandom78 on June 07, 2007, 07:58:30 AM no its not doug, ITS QUAILMAN!!!!!!!
working on sigy now... (http://yachi.smdepot.net/IMGS/11138.png) resized + name worked Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: drfweega on June 07, 2007, 09:03:42 AM Looking better... try making the font larger and even distance from each corner then try moving quailman a little closer to inside and up some. Then you can claim that you finished your first real piece of artwork (SIGwork).
Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Kingofrandom78 on June 07, 2007, 09:42:18 AM (http://yachi.smdepot.net/IMGS/66623.png)
just what the doctor ordered! haha Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: SMD on June 07, 2007, 10:25:11 AM for the record, quailman is amazing. utterly fantastic, and smokin hott sex0rz with patty mayonaise. true playa!
Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Kingofrandom78 on June 07, 2007, 10:25:59 AM hahaha, now whos the dirty patty??? HAHA
Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Snipes101 on June 07, 2007, 01:33:34 PM i don't know about quirman i mean quailman doesn't seem to have to much muscle, weird head and Smile face nose hahaha j/k
Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: drfweega on June 07, 2007, 02:59:38 PM I'm guessing that you've never seen the show 'Doug'.
Your sig looks good Yachi, I'd call it your first attempt at a beautiful future of SIG making. Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Snipes101 on June 07, 2007, 05:10:14 PM I'm guessing that you've never seen the show 'Doug'. Your sig looks good Yachi, I'd call it your first attempt at a beautiful future of SIG making. yeah i have a couple of times, but if i remember right didn't he have a side kick 'Skeeter'; blue, long nose, with a thunder bolt on his shirt idk kind of fuzzy in childhood memories. Title: Re: Second atempt... Post by: Kingofrandom78 on June 08, 2007, 03:17:36 AM WOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooOOOOOOOO i made art! haha
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